Camouflage

Oct. 20th, 2012 05:02 pm
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camouflage
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Once caught, the Gryphon never had a chance. She was vulnerable on the ground and, at the Queen’s order, the faithless Trees hemmed the Gryphon in and wove a net of branches from which she could not escape.

The dead tree Minerva hid in could not betray her. She kept her traitorous eyes shut, tilted her head, and listened to the Witch’s accusations and the Gryphon’s haughty retorts.

Minerva heard the wand cutting through cold air and the crackle of flesh and feathers turning to stone. She remained as frozen on the branch as the Gryphon now was on the ground below.

“We’ll leave her,” the Queen said. “She can crumble to dust here.”

The Dwarf’s whip cracked and the reindeer pulled the Queen’s sledge away.

Minerva did not open her eyes until she felt the creeping chill of lengthening shadows. She saw the stone Gryphon under her branch, defiant, beak open in challenge. Minerva wanted to say farewell, but would not risk revealing herself to a listening Tree. And the Gryphon could not hear her, or anything else.

She launched from the concealing branch and flew off to warn the Free Narnians that their leader, their General, had fallen.

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An American Eastern Screech Owl

Date: 2012-10-20 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lotl101.livejournal.com
The General story referenced in the most recent H&M? So sad, but I love it.

Date: 2012-10-20 10:30 pm (UTC)
autumnia: Central Park (Default)
From: [personal profile] autumnia
And so began the General's long imprisonment in stone until the Pevensies appear....

Date: 2012-10-20 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliopausa.livejournal.com
Wonderful and chilling. The economy of this is great -- the "haughty retorts" telegraphs the whole interrogation. And Minerva -- "her traitorous eyes" says so much about the owl strengths and contributions to this guerilla warfare. (The photo is brilliant!)

Date: 2012-10-20 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starbrowsings.livejournal.com
Oh I am SO GLAD you showed us this moment. The reference to it in H&M was one of the most electrifying revelations about your OCs to come out - so the General was also integral to the resistance back then. Amazing.

I think what really got to me in this one was the faithless Trees betraying her...one of their own, as they no doubt have on many occasions for Jadis...and that a dead Tree in this case is better than a treacherous one ::sob::

Annnnd...this reminds me I need to finish TSG. For reals!

Date: 2012-10-21 02:12 pm (UTC)
edenfalling: stylized black-and-white line art of a sunset over water (Default)
From: [personal profile] edenfalling
Chilling and concise. I like how clearly all three characters are drawn in so few words -- the General with her "haughty retorts," Minerva with her caution, and Jadis... well, "We'll leave her," the Queen said. "She can crumble to dust here." That sums her up in a nutshell.

Date: 2012-10-21 02:57 pm (UTC)
snacky: (wandering albatross)
From: [personal profile] snacky
I love all stories with supplemental media! :D And Minerva, what a perfect name for an Owl spy. I liked how she wanted to say farewell, but knew better.

Date: 2012-10-22 02:11 am (UTC)
lady_songsmith: owl (Default)
From: [personal profile] lady_songsmith
Oooh, the backstory for the General! And a literal stone gryphon in TSG. I love Minerva blending into the tree, and the picture is just perfect.

Date: 2012-10-22 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pencildragon11.livejournal.com
Wow. Such a telling glimpse of the Winter in 200 words, with a STONE GRYPHON (did not catch that until I read the comments) and the resistance movement and traitorous Trees. Mm.

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